1) She impatiently waited for her father to get back in the car; he took as long as possible in order to annoy his daughter.
2) He left the car door ajar when he went into the hardware store; his daughter shivered in the cold seat lazily refusing to close the open door.
3) Sam drove a Ford Truck; Lilly drives a sleek sports car.
4) “I rest my case,” the lawyer cried out in triumph; he gave an evil grin towards the accused person satisfied that John would be in jail for twenty more years.
5) Sparkey continuously barked causing the house to ring with constant noise; Al yelled at her.
6) “Ore truck!” yelled the clamjamphine; they ducked into the bushes.
7) A black cat bolted after the mouse’s tail; the mouse scuttled away making it to safety under the stairs.
8) “Your face!” a naive teenager retorted; Mariah punched him in the gut.
9) Jennifer trudged to the store; she hadn’t realized that her mom had already been.
10) “pull my toe!” implored Ben, the twenty five year old; Jennifer reluctantly did so; he giggled childishly and curled up in a ball.
Is a clamjamphine a worthless person? You need to look at sentence number ten: fix the run-on here.
ReplyDeleteAlso, the first two sentences sound like part of a memoir.
a) its actually a mob of worthless people
ReplyDeleteb) I will fix the run on
c) it is a memoir